Much improved – better pictures which are getting across genre. Looking more and more like a contents page. Here are some possible tweaks you can make: I would adjust the positioning of photos at the bottom. (Perhaps if the bottom left was in colour you might see the amplifiers more clearly.) It is difficult to read some of the Ella Jones caption.
I would simplify this page. There is a lot going on. You’ve included a ‘WIN’ pug. This is good but it is not clear what you can win.
Maybe try putting the page numbers at the top. This is what people want to see first - you'll have to play around with this idea.
Much improved – better pictures which are getting across genre. Looking more and more like a contents page. Here are some possible tweaks you can make: I would adjust the positioning of photos at the bottom. (Perhaps if the bottom left was in colour you might see the amplifiers more clearly.) It is difficult to read some of the Ella Jones caption.
ReplyDeleteI would simplify this page. There is a lot going on. You’ve included a ‘WIN’ pug. This is good but it is not clear what you can win.
Maybe try putting the page numbers at the top. This is what people want to see first - you'll have to play around with this idea.