Front Page: Masthead and colour scheme look good. However I think the layout of the font needs to be slightly altered. It seems very busy at the top of the page and very plain at the bottom of the page. I would change your model’s outfit – needs to be more thought out for an indie mag. You also need to make sure that the reader instantly knows that this is an Indie music magazine. The ‘win tickets’ pug needs to stand out even more.
Contents Page: I like the overall lay out of your contents but as discussed you need more pictures showing music elements. Need to make the ‘win’ stand out has it is very small. ‘The biggest upcoming star' needs to be more obvious as this is your name headline Your magazine is £3 but only contains 38 pages. Need to adjust this.
DPS: Shows good continuity and style. I like the titles. I do feel you need to add more to the page as it is quite plain. Again be sure you are clearly getting across genre.
Overall: Lots of thought put into the construction and it is coming together nicely. I look forward to seeing your next draft!!
Front Page: Masthead and colour scheme look good.
ReplyDeleteHowever I think the layout of the font needs to be slightly altered. It seems very busy at the top of the page and very plain at the bottom of the page. I would change your model’s outfit – needs to be more thought out for an indie mag. You also need to make sure that the reader instantly knows that this is an Indie music magazine.
The ‘win tickets’ pug needs to stand out even more.
Contents Page:
I like the overall lay out of your contents but as discussed you need more pictures showing music elements. Need to make the ‘win’ stand out has it is very small. ‘The biggest upcoming star' needs to be more obvious as this is your name headline
Your magazine is £3 but only contains 38 pages. Need to adjust this.
DPS:
Shows good continuity and style. I like the titles. I do feel you need to add more to the page as it is quite plain. Again be sure you are clearly getting across genre.
Overall: Lots of thought put into the construction and it is coming together nicely. I look forward to seeing your next draft!!
I like how all the colors work well with each other and how you have used the codes of conventions. I would say it was a little plain though.
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