I like the colour scheme you have chosen. To improve you need to experiment with some of the text font and positioning. I also think your pictures need to contain some sort of music element.
I like the colour scheme you have chosen. To improve you need to experiment with some of the text font and positioning. I also think your pictures need to contain some sort of music element.
I like the color scheme and how you have laid out boxes but not put the text exactly in them., this makes it more interesting to look at. Also you could maybe make the title a bit bigger just to be in proportion to the rest of the pages text.
very good work for your first draft.
ReplyDeleteI like the colour scheme you have chosen. To improve you need to experiment with some of the text font and positioning. I also think your pictures need to contain some sort of music element.
very good work for your first draft.
ReplyDeleteI like the colour scheme you have chosen. To improve you need to experiment with some of the text font and positioning. I also think your pictures need to contain some sort of music element.
I like the colours used as they go well together and also the Masthead across the top of the page as it looks well spaced out. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the color scheme and how you have laid out boxes but not put the text exactly in them., this makes it more interesting to look at. Also you could maybe make the title a bit bigger just to be in proportion to the rest of the pages text.
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